Talk:Incorporation/Bylaws

Librenews sounds much better than soylent. I do hope you used libreoffice to prepare it :-p ~ crutchy 02:52, 23 May 2014 (UTC)

Role of president

To "serve as the primary channel of communication with the Foundation and Member Sites" seems a bit much for one person, and can be restrictive. Not sure if i'm misunderstanding the intention though. Primary channel of commmunication should be whatever is most appropriate for given situation; ie: github for development-related communication, irc for quick informal discussions, etc. Maybe some minor clarification might help. ~ crutchy 12:41, 28 May 2014 (UTC)

within ten (10) days before meeting

I was a bit confused by the references to submitting things "within 10 days before" a meeting. I changed one instance to something I thought made more sense but left the other just in case I got it wrong. I would have thought submissions to the foundation could be made any time before the meeting as long as there is some time (10 days) to review submssions before motioning them at the meeting. Prolly just another case of minor clarification being helpful. ~ crutchy 12:46, 28 May 2014 (UTC)

True, this should be "at least 10 days prior to a meeting." I'll go through and change it, thanks! mrcoolbp (talk) 18:28, 3 June 2014 (UTC)

Definitions

Imho a lot of this section seems a bit supurfluous. Seems like you may as well replace the content with "all terms have their usual meanings". ~ crutchy 14:59, 29 May 2014 (UTC)